Review: The Clouded Hills

The Clouded Hills by Brenda Jagger

My rating: 3 of 5 stars



I would have rated it so much higher if there had not been so many typos; so many that they distracted from the story line and I had to go back and read many sentences / paragraphs at least twice to understand what was happening.

Is this the price we pay for self-publishing? Please please authors get someone to at least proof read your books before publishing them!



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Review: Across the Mersey

Across the Mersey by Annie Groves

My rating: 3 of 5 stars



This is one of my favourite genres, family saga. It took me a while to get into the story line and characters, marred by the presentation as a Kindle book. The location and characters change from paragraph to paragraph with no clear line spacing or other delineator to show that the scene has changed. In some cases scenes and characters changed mid paragraph, I had to go back and reread in several cases to make sure I had the right people in the right place! On at least one occasion the wrong character name was used ..... it's a shame because the lack of editing made what should have been a good read quite difficult to follow.

I will look for the next book in the series as I now feel I know the main characters well .... hopefully the publisher will have achieved better editing!



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Review: Fractured

Fractured by Dani Atkins

My rating: 4 of 5 stars



I could not put this book down. At first I though it was just another chick-lit ..... then I was mystified, could not see which way the story was going to go. And just when I thought it had morphed back into another standard happy ever after ending ...... very emotional ending.



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Review: Winter's End

Winter's End by Clarissa Cartharn

My rating: 0 of 5 stars



I rarely give up on a book once I start it. This is one of those rare occurrences. There are so many grammatical errors, words missing from sentences making them meaningless. No matter how good the story, and I didn't get far enough to determine whether it was a good story or not, there are so many errors that they completely detract from it.

This book has obviously never been proof-read or edited either by the author or by anyone else.



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Review: The Golden Acorn

The Golden Acorn by Catherine Cooper

My rating: 3 of 5 stars



In the style of a Harry Potter tale .... if you believe in magic, or even if you don't and just want a few hours enjoyment, take a few hours and read this tale of druids, acorns and of course, pure magic.



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Review: Stolen

Stolen by Rebecca Muddiman

My rating: 4 of 5 stars



The disappearance of an infant shatters the lives of parents Abby and Paul Henshaw. The story follows Abby's life after her daughter is abducted and the investigation by DI Gardener. Lives unravel, you may think you know the guilty party early in the book but there are many twists and turns. A good solid plot.



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Review: Hearts of Gold

Hearts of Gold by Catrin Collier

My rating: 4 of 5 stars



First of a series in 8, set in Pontypridd in Wales and following the lives of a small mining community. This, the first book starts during the Depression and the main character is Bethan Powell a trainee nurse / midwife. Similar style to Maeve Binchy



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